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nie huaisang ([personal profile] unanswering) wrote2020-02-21 09:22 pm

[pcs] beau

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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-24 07:22 am (UTC)(link)
[ for a long second she kind of doesn't want to. she has been trying her best to ignore what's going on with her transformation since this morning, since she thought she saw bone. she pulls her coat closer during that second, like she's going to refuse, and then: ]

It probably got worse. [ she says, uncomfortably, and moves her coat. sure enough - her ribs are exposed, showing off her spine and ribcage. none of her organs, though, it's just... void. ]
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cw: body horror for this whole thread god

[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-24 06:14 pm (UTC)(link)
[ she frowns deeper. ]

No. It feels weird. I don't know what to do about it - it was. It was gross. [ she hesitates. ] My, um. Skin? Came off.
Edited 2020-03-24 19:01 (UTC)
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-25 05:39 am (UTC)(link)
[ it's a good thing he amends what he says because she actually almost looks - hurt, for a split second, when he says to cover them. thankfully she is pretty good at neutral faces. ]

Maybe I'll go get a jacket or something. [ she says, shifting her coat again. ] There's not a lot else I can do.

[ shift. ] I'm trying not to think about it too hard.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-25 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
[ she's kind of past caring about the goo at the moment, at least. the whole greed thing is also at the back of her mind and not the forefront. thankfully. ]

Do you think the bandages will even stay? [ she sounds dubious. ] I really don't want bandages slipping around over my exposed ribs, that sounds - bad.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-25 09:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah, that might work. [ she sighs a little. a beat. ] Hold on. Let me just. Do this first.

[ she wants to hide her stuff. so. ] Stay here. I'll be right back.