[pcs] beau

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Kim's fucking weird. [ yep that's definitely jealousy. ]

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[yeah he feels that...]

He really is... I don't think there's anything to be jealous of, miss Beau.

[beau is much better in his clearly informed opinion?]

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[ aw, that's so nice of him. ]

I'm -- not jealous! [ IS. IS JEALOUS ] She's not - I don't think she's into me anyway. Whatever.

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Is that why--?

[he looks surprised, then a little contemplative.]

Well, she is rather pretty...

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Yeah. [ heavy gay sigh ] She's real sweet, but she also doesn't take any fucking nonsense. She yelled at Jin Ling to stop trying to kick my ass and he listened, it was incredible.

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Jin Ling did what?!

[he sighs too, resigned, his shoulders slumping.]

-at least someone can get him to behave, even if it isn't me...

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It's fine. I kind of - you know. I wasn't being nice either. [ she may have flipped him the bird ]