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nie huaisang ([personal profile] unanswering) wrote2020-02-21 09:22 pm

[pcs] beau

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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 04:33 am (UTC)(link)
[ she wants to die just put her in the dirt

she just STARES at him. ]


I - okay. [ deep breath. ] Okay, okay, okay. What we're going to do is we're not going to hide this. You're gonna be like Asch, straight up, and you're going to say Stefano tried to kill you. Because if you try to hide it like this, it's gonna look suspicious.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
We're not gonna be able to just brush -- Sang, babe, if we hide it, it's just gonna look like you're guilty.

[ guhhhhh she sighs out heavy. ] We're not gonna let what happened to Asch happen to you.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 05:02 am (UTC)(link)
[ she scowls at him. ]

Once they figure out a sharp weapon slit his throat they might. [ also - there's a bit of guilt in her, and then: ] I think this is a mistake.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 05:23 am (UTC)(link)
[ she has not done that! ]

Okay. Okay, alright. [ she sighs out heavily and just - falls forward into her own lap, crunched up like a grumpy pretzel. ] This is a bad idea but - I'm gonna try to protect you.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 05:31 am (UTC)(link)
[ she's gonna stay here in her tangled mess and grumble curse words into his blanket nest how about that ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
All of you fuckers are gonna have me die of stress from a young age. I'm not even thirty.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-07 03:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Don't be sorry. [ she sighs, curled up. ] I'd rather know. So I can make sure you're okay.

We'll figure it out, babe. Promise.