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nie huaisang ([personal profile] unanswering) wrote2020-02-21 09:22 pm

[pcs] beau

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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 04:34 am (UTC)(link)
[ she swallows very, very hard around the lump in her throat. the comforting helps a little! she hurts, but he's being very sweet to her. ]

Maybe. Or maybe they'll second guess me when I check people. [ a beat. ] It's fine, you're alive and you're not in a cage.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Shut the fuck up, you were defending yourself. You're not at any fault. [ her tone's a little harsh. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
[ oh. she shifts under the blanket again. ]

I'd do it again. So.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 05:12 am (UTC)(link)
[ a long, long pause, and then slowly, she starts pulling herself up to sit. she looks about as bad as zombie hunter does. ]

Not really. I'm a piece of shit. But. [ sniff. ] We need to get that bullet out of your shoulder still, babe.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 05:36 am (UTC)(link)
[ her jaw works. he gets a flash of - uselessness? just briefly. ]

Not hungry.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
[ no, let her self destruct, she's really good at it

also have some self hatred, guilt, and panic too, those are good. they're kind of - distant? like she's not quite the one feeling it. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 05:44 am (UTC)(link)
[ aw, thanks, buddy. she stands, slowly. her foot's kind of killing her a little after her fight earlier so she's slow, but she lets him. ]

Hunter is. [ she says, quietly. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 05:49 am (UTC)(link)
[ it's okay, he didn't know!! ]

Mmhm. [ which is part of why she's flipping out so bad. ] It's - it's overwhelming.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
Yeah. Me too. I've been trying to send him stuff in return but it isn't... working very well.

[ sniff. ] I felt you trying earlier. I appreciate it.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
[ she'll limp along! ]

He'll... he'll fall asleep eventually. [ or she'll knock him out herself. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 06:10 am (UTC)(link)
[ cookie... she stares at it. ]

I'll try. But I want to keep him company. He doesn't deserve to be alone.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-08 06:22 am (UTC)(link)
[ UGH. obediently she breaks off a piece of it and just... lifelessly eats it. ]

You don't know that. Maybe if he has human company the antidote will take easier.

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