[pcs] beau

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[ oh, huh. she gives the skull a weird look until he explains. ]

... Oh. [ she nods. ] Yeah. Yeah, we got a knife. Yours is better. [ she seems relieved! feels that way too. ]

Don't tell anybody else you have that. [ she's thinking along the same lines. ]

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[he really got lucky, what the fuck?

oh, but speaking of him getting lucky. he pauses a moment before suddenly realizing-]

Oh-! It wasn't just me, though, young master Akira received the same thing... and since master Kim was with us, I think he did as well...?

[so they definitely know he has this, but now she knows they do, too.]

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[ oh, yeah, that's - extra good to know. she goes ahead and just flops back down on the floor. god honestly just give her death. ]

Akira's good. I like Akira. [ she says inanely. she used all her brain power on making the connections between the lists. ] I think we can trust him.

I don't know about Kim. But. [ a beat. she grumbles: ] Brilith seems to like him.

[ is that jealousy no shut up ]

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I don't know miss Brilith, but... he makes me uncomfortable, sometimes. I don't- I can't really describe it.

[there's a little tension from him, there. something definitely makes him wary about babo kim.]

Young master Akira's all right, though, he's not... I really don't know.

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[ GRUMBLE ]

Kim's fucking weird. [ yep that's definitely jealousy. ]

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[yeah he feels that...]

He really is... I don't think there's anything to be jealous of, miss Beau.

[beau is much better in his clearly informed opinion?]

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[ aw, that's so nice of him. ]

I'm -- not jealous! [ IS. IS JEALOUS ] She's not - I don't think she's into me anyway. Whatever.

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Is that why--?

[he looks surprised, then a little contemplative.]

Well, she is rather pretty...

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Yeah. [ heavy gay sigh ] She's real sweet, but she also doesn't take any fucking nonsense. She yelled at Jin Ling to stop trying to kick my ass and he listened, it was incredible.

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Jin Ling did what?!

[he sighs too, resigned, his shoulders slumping.]

-at least someone can get him to behave, even if it isn't me...

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It's fine. I kind of - you know. I wasn't being nice either. [ she may have flipped him the bird ]