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nie huaisang ([personal profile] unanswering) wrote2020-02-21 09:22 pm

[pcs] beau

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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
[ she would also like to know about glitter. it's awful. ]

Don't trust any of them. They're all fuckin' liars. They're nice, but they're liars. [ she points her finger up in his face. ] Don't forget that.

[ he can see the papers! they're all faded and nearly illegible, but there's notes. They read as follows:

one page, with the name field containing the only legible letters Y K: Young, but did not appreciate the lollipop. Leg healing fine. Had a little visitor today as well. Visitor did appreciate lollipop.
another, with DEPS & MBIS: Twins. Even get sick together. Fascinating. Recommended a few tricks even after they coughed up blood. Worth looking into. Also recommended nurses instead.
and a last one, with TA K OH: Prince????? ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Why would they be here? Why would they be in the middle of his huge fucking mansion where he brings people in and like, we all turn into monsters? Peach said this is usually a thing for - for cultural exchange, but there's a monster in the lake.

[ she scowls. ]

I gotta check. Because someone has a list of the names of the zombies in the morgue. And I gotta make sure they match. I gotta make sure he's not --

[ she pauses. her voice quakes a little. ]

If any of you end up like the shit we saw in the hospital, I'll never fucking forgive myself.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
[ she seems okay with it! in fact, she very carefully reaches to rest a hand on top of his. ]

You - you just do the best shit you can do. [ she says, exhausted. you know when you get so tired you just want to cry? she actually is - not sobs or anything, just tears dripping down her face. ]

Just be careful, okay? I like you, man. I don't wanna see you get fucking -- any of that. I don't want any of that.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
[ she wipes her face with her arm, it's fine. she doesn't want him to see her cry anyway. ]

Yeah. I'm trying. I gotta be here to make sure you and everybody makes it. If you hear anything, tell me, okay?
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
[ she squeezes his hand, if she still has a hold on it. ]

Use that to your advantage, man. If people don't think you're a threat, they might drop shit around you. You can overhear a lot that way.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
[ HM NO here he can have a flash of protectiveness and anger at that. ]

Nobody is gonna get rid of you. [ scowl. she's too tired to know if he meant anything other than like, the permanent version of getting rid. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
[ oh, huh. she gives the skull a weird look until he explains. ]

... Oh. [ she nods. ] Yeah. Yeah, we got a knife. Yours is better. [ she seems relieved! feels that way too. ]

Don't tell anybody else you have that. [ she's thinking along the same lines. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:58 am (UTC)(link)
[ oh, yeah, that's - extra good to know. she goes ahead and just flops back down on the floor. god honestly just give her death. ]

Akira's good. I like Akira. [ she says inanely. she used all her brain power on making the connections between the lists. ] I think we can trust him.

I don't know about Kim. But. [ a beat. she grumbles: ] Brilith seems to like him.

[ is that jealousy no shut up ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 07:12 am (UTC)(link)
[ GRUMBLE ]

Kim's fucking weird. [ yep that's definitely jealousy. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:38 pm (UTC)(link)
[ aw, that's so nice of him. ]

I'm -- not jealous! [ IS. IS JEALOUS ] She's not - I don't think she's into me anyway. Whatever.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Yeah. [ heavy gay sigh ] She's real sweet, but she also doesn't take any fucking nonsense. She yelled at Jin Ling to stop trying to kick my ass and he listened, it was incredible.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 07:00 pm (UTC)(link)
It's fine. I kind of - you know. I wasn't being nice either. [ she may have flipped him the bird ]