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nie huaisang ([personal profile] unanswering) wrote2020-02-21 09:22 pm

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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 03:15 am (UTC)(link)
[ she's like super pale and bandaged up now, but she's okay! mostly. she's also exhausted. her eyes are bloodshot and her circles are Large. ]

Mmhm. [ she says with a sigh ] I'm okay. Don't worry.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 03:21 am (UTC)(link)
[ people fretting over her is still weird!! but she accepts it much easier than certain cloaked gremlins. ]

Lemme ask you a question, actually - your corpses. Do they ever look like they're all mashed together? Like people sewn together.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 03:43 am (UTC)(link)
[ gross. super gross. ]

That's what was in the hospital. People sewn up all together. A couple of women together, and then someone that looked like they were embedded into a stretcher of some kind. They were chasing us around.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 03:49 am (UTC)(link)
I - I really. Really. Hope they were dead. [ she's got a pretty high tolerance for violence, but thinking of those people as people and not monsters makes her feel sick. ]

Lio killed them, I think. With the fire. They were really miserable sounding.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:02 am (UTC)(link)
[ she's just gonna. lay down, don't mind her. just on the floor? probably? i have no idea where they are. doesn't matter, she just lays down. ]

Me either. [ she curls around her stupid box that she's been holding since she got out of the room. ] I think I have some ideas, but nothing solid. I need to talk to someone first and see if what I have is.

Um. [ god she's so tired. words are really hard. ] Is... is right.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:13 am (UTC)(link)
[ thanks buddy, she appreciates it. ]

So. So there's - in the hospital. [ THIS IS GOING TO BE A HELL OF AN EXPLANATION ] I mean. The morgue. In the morgue? There were zombies. And there was a list. On that list was a bunch of names? And they were the bodies. So in the hospital there's - here.

[ she peers around to make sure nobody is watching, and then opens her box. there is a grappling hook just covered in glitter in the box, as well as a sticker of a cat that says MEOWRIFFIC on the inside of the box. Also, some papers, which is what she pulls out. ]

On these papers are names that I can't. See. I can't see them fully. So I gotta match them. Because I think fucking Blue was experimenting on people.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:26 am (UTC)(link)
[ she would also like to know about glitter. it's awful. ]

Don't trust any of them. They're all fuckin' liars. They're nice, but they're liars. [ she points her finger up in his face. ] Don't forget that.

[ he can see the papers! they're all faded and nearly illegible, but there's notes. They read as follows:

one page, with the name field containing the only legible letters Y K: Young, but did not appreciate the lollipop. Leg healing fine. Had a little visitor today as well. Visitor did appreciate lollipop.
another, with DEPS & MBIS: Twins. Even get sick together. Fascinating. Recommended a few tricks even after they coughed up blood. Worth looking into. Also recommended nurses instead.
and a last one, with TA K OH: Prince????? ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Why would they be here? Why would they be in the middle of his huge fucking mansion where he brings people in and like, we all turn into monsters? Peach said this is usually a thing for - for cultural exchange, but there's a monster in the lake.

[ she scowls. ]

I gotta check. Because someone has a list of the names of the zombies in the morgue. And I gotta make sure they match. I gotta make sure he's not --

[ she pauses. her voice quakes a little. ]

If any of you end up like the shit we saw in the hospital, I'll never fucking forgive myself.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 05:21 am (UTC)(link)
[ she seems okay with it! in fact, she very carefully reaches to rest a hand on top of his. ]

You - you just do the best shit you can do. [ she says, exhausted. you know when you get so tired you just want to cry? she actually is - not sobs or anything, just tears dripping down her face. ]

Just be careful, okay? I like you, man. I don't wanna see you get fucking -- any of that. I don't want any of that.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 05:33 am (UTC)(link)
[ she wipes her face with her arm, it's fine. she doesn't want him to see her cry anyway. ]

Yeah. I'm trying. I gotta be here to make sure you and everybody makes it. If you hear anything, tell me, okay?
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:07 am (UTC)(link)
[ she squeezes his hand, if she still has a hold on it. ]

Use that to your advantage, man. If people don't think you're a threat, they might drop shit around you. You can overhear a lot that way.
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:18 am (UTC)(link)
[ HM NO here he can have a flash of protectiveness and anger at that. ]

Nobody is gonna get rid of you. [ scowl. she's too tired to know if he meant anything other than like, the permanent version of getting rid. ]
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[personal profile] disreguarded 2020-03-06 06:46 am (UTC)(link)
[ oh, huh. she gives the skull a weird look until he explains. ]

... Oh. [ she nods. ] Yeah. Yeah, we got a knife. Yours is better. [ she seems relieved! feels that way too. ]

Don't tell anybody else you have that. [ she's thinking along the same lines. ]

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